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Promises

Of one heart, twice made
He vowed never to wound her
She never to bleed
©2005-2009 ~Maastracht
:iconmaastracht:

Author's Comments

I'm quite pleased with this piece. It's not overly wordy, or forced, like I feel some of my other poems are. The message -- the quandary I'm attempting to depict -- comes across perfectly as I intended it.

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:iconthe-figurehead:
Very nice. I wish I could achieve such a poem, but I fear I ramble way too much. Also, I loved the picture. Did you create it, or is it from somewhere else?
:iconmaastracht:
I see where you're coming from, yes. I tend to overdo it oftentimes, myself. Still, there must be merit to rants and raves, too. ;)

As for the image: it was a gift to me from google. :D

Thank you for your kind words, anyhow. ^^

(too... many... emotes....XD.... argh... )
:iconpoetry-in-despair:
:heart: lovely. i see that you submitted it a long time ago, but i hope you don't mind a favorite a few months late?

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