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Pretend repent-
ance per chance
prefaces remorse-
less bespeaking,
would you....?

No, and not-

Then one, two,
too, won for-
ever the loss
of possession.
Who could…

-me, all my-

…guess that,
the embrace
of limbs that,
used to strangle,
choke to breathe?
Like me dying is
like denying my
immortal mortality
in this bloodredknifedead
life of no/not me/my

-own, but mine.-
©2004-2009 ~Maastracht
:iconmaastracht:

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The slightly revised version of what I entered into the nine minute contest, fully intending not to win..... >>

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:iconstreakedlemur:
I like the flow here...

Even if you didn't intend it to win, there seems something a tad bit chilling about this peice, Its very interesting.

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April 24, 2004
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